Suggestions?
Good song, I like the errie feel of the synths, but try to keep the drums simple, steady and grooey. Double kick + trance drums = kid of awkward sounding =P
Other than that, this song is crewed up and has left me crying, in a good way =P
Keep it up!
Wow really? Thanks ^-^
its the beat..
this is weird and cool man. Now then it doesn't definantly count as trance but i don't know where else u would put it. The beat u need is different then this. 4 kicks hats in beatween do wutever u want with the clap. Make sure your base follows the hats oh and make it louder. make sure your base is in the same key as your synths. Does that make sense? Good though i like originality.
Interesting...
I enjoyed this piece to a certain extent...although I do think you could change a few things -- don't get me wrong, this is very good, and everyone has their own style and preference. In my opinion, this had a bit too much tune diversity; I found that once you finally found a tune and pattern that worked, the song had come to an end. Very nice transfer from the beginning slow part to the fast part, though. I really liked that.
Keep working! You definitely have talent!
Thanks ^-^
not too bad
in the second half, that one chop doesnt sound good when going that fast. Overall, its not a bad track, but i have to say trance isnt all that spectacular to me. Great effort tho, 8/10.
and yea, try using more bass :)
Well,
nice try, but one thing I am still working on as well, is if your going to have a full break in your song, you have to explode at full pace when you come back in. If you ease out to just a beat for a few seconds, then ease back in with the melody, but in a different tone. Again, nice try, keep it up ^^.
thanks :D