to much effort to make a flash movie that failed
i can say dont take the joke but probaly this is about a accident of chuckE cheese,S
i can say this is weird that passed the blammed but you need to get some good ideas to make a good flash and won better trophys bacause you won the turd of the Week
I'm very proud of Turd Of The Week.
I told Alan, but he was too busy sleeping.
I'm surprised this got past blamage.
put some more effort in it, I doubt it's even your final in animation class. I would suggest trying to improve on drawing, try to use your line tool, It's a lot less of a hassle then constantly redrawing with the paint brush ( I have been there.) plus it keeps your work nice and neat. I did like the fact that you added a voice, but if you have trouble with voice acting, you could always try a voice acter on the website ( as long as your serious about it and dedicated to it.)
I did get the joke, but the way you presented it turned the joke off, try to have kids running around, poking your character, trying to communicate to you, a fat kid asking food from you, ect. Leading up to the point where you jump out of the slide and cause your character serious injuries. Don't be afraid to be "off the wall." It's Newgrounds its a lot more leanit then youtube try to take advantage of it, you might wanna take a look on help/FAQ to see your limits.
hope this helped :).
Thanks, xXbrostbuggXx, that did help.
Where can I get kids, though?
Just awful
That was just terrible , but it is the kind of terrible that I can't tell if this is a joke or an actual effort at a flash . There is almost nothing to this flash , just a crudely drawn guy falling off a crudely drawn pipe with a very strange voice , I give you 1 for the effort but I'm not sure how much actual effort wen into this
++++
great effort, good sampling!, music is often discussed but it is mostly annoying because it always ends up in a discussion about where the possible mutebutton is.. so yea it was great!
1 for effort
Now, I see why this deserved the turd of the week; it's too bad! I'm not going to go around wondering why this passed judgement or things like that; rather, why it is bad and what could be done to improve it.
The graphics: Bad, man, terrible. It's just a bad couple of brush strokes with some extra scribbles for the buildings, and a presumable "slide" drawn with a yellow fill and a gray outline. The character is a bit better...compared to a mere stick figure.
The storyline: For those of you who don't know the full title, it's "Alan goes to Chuck E. Cheese's". It seems like a good plot, but no, it's just a sad botched implementation. It's just a person falling down the said slide, going "whoops".
The animation: This is about the only good thing here. It's a person falling down, yes, but thankfully the motion tweens by Flash were good. It could be improved, though, but then again, there's no storyline to back it up.
The sound: "Oops". By Microsoft Sam. Not very good, I must say. The voice in itself is bad, and the quality of it is worse.
Suggestions? You could've extended the storyline, made it into something like a documentary wherein an imaginary person goes to chuck e. cheese's and then learns about it. But that's your choice, and it's all right with me if you got a good mark in your AP animation 3 class. But please don't upload it here on Newgrounds, the standards here are higher than said animation class.
~~ Summary ~~
~~ Good points ~~
1) That's about it.
~~ Bad points ~~
1) Bad sound
2) Bad animation
3) Horrible art
4) Poor storyline