Thank you! Art is so rare these days.
This is good work, your style on it's own really gives off a sort of dark and oldschool vibe, your whispers though were too fast and incoherent at times, I think you have the potential to do a lot better maybe with more decent equipment or simply by enhancing the audio or something :P
The whole poem was a delight to me. I love your writing, please don't doubt the quality of your work because it is incredible ^^ The images speak of their own story along the lines of the poem, it's really beautiful.
Hope to see more of you in the future! Keep up the good work! X)