Truly Amazing
This is one of the best peices i've viewed on here, is the wording original. The movies compliments the poem so well the art work is good and holds it's own against the well spun words.
Reviews for "The Old Ash Tree"
Nice story, bad narration
The art and the story being told were interesting and pretty good, but the narration is on the poor side. A majority of the issue was the whisper. It would have been great if you had told it in a voice befitting a lost child, instead of kids trying to tell ghost stories without being caught up late.
Almost perfect
Almost. If not for the voice acting, I don't know if that was you but, it sounded like a digital reader voice. Just too heavily processed or something. I know it was supposed to sound all ghosty and whispery, but it just came out kind of too fast and silly. Other than that it was amazing though
Not bad
The animation was clean and the music was a little spooky with the nursery rhythm to it. However, I believe the whispering poetry was a little much. The poem itself wasn't bad, but why the whisper?
Still, I give this 8 stars.
Root of Excellence
I have loved this authors work for quite some time now and as each new submission comes into Newgrounds it seems the wonders never cease. As usual the story is frightfully cryptic and left me leaning in on the edge of my seat with the whisper of the voice leaving me with that sweet old sense of despair to come. The visuals were excellent and nearly warped and rusty yet bright with its black and white form which added to the frighting rising mood all the way to the end. The Story short as it was it was interesting and so entertaining I could watch it multiple times the concept made up for the factor of timing in my opinion. I always look forward to more submission especially since Halloween is around the corner so in closing 5 out of 5 and 10 out of 10, I loved this, Great job!