wow its pretty funny!
in almost didnt watch it cuss the other comments Xl
its funny and great!hope to see a ep.2 soon!
Reviews for "Pwanchi Burger Episode 1"
Hmm~
I actually loved your guys previous videos. The Resident Evil parodies were great, and I follow you guys on facebook. This one... not so much.
Everyone else has already spoken, and although they say it rather harshly, it's pretty much what I thought at well.
The characters are too stereotypical. The "untouchable badass", the "stupid one" (who Ive named "the Chris Redfield copy), the "gamer", the... "creeper", the "random ethnic group".... There needs to be more to these people, and Im sure in later episodes you could have established it. Maybe only really introducing a characters and their main trait in various episodes? One dedicated to "the badass", another to "the gamer". And give them depth. Even a comedy needs character depth.
The art style I have no complaints over because you guys are always improving. I love your work and that you're getting better. Its your style, keep it up. I couldnt do things like that.
Story... Well so far I dont see one, minus any Clerks 2 homage which you've mentioned I believe you didnt see. I hope some form of plot forms in the future.
The sound quality could be better. But I have no idea what youre working with and how. I dont know the first thing about recording.
I will watch future episodes in hopes that things will get better and give you the benefit of the doubt. Good luck guys!
cyotecody555 responds:
Thank you
Yes this episode is mainly all about pointing out who the characters are, what they look like, and how they sound. We figured the best way to go about it would be having a complaining customer enter and point out the shotty establishment.
No we did not have the sort of time to go more into detail for EACH character, that's something that will come gradually without force as the series goes on. Believe me, there is alot more to these guys, just not shown in the pilot episode very much.
We'll just have to wait and see how you guys all feel about the next couple episodes....
It sure will be interesting....
well..
Maybe I missed the point, but I was expecting more comedy. I'm not a video critic, but I know what I like. This wasn't it. I didn't laugh or even chuckle the entire time... However, I want to say this is just probably a fluke, or something on my part, thus, I'll watch some of your other work.
Good luck on future submissions!
it was ok not your guys best.
ps when are the new resident evil ones coming out they where much better
Upon viewing this again...
I realize that that was the absolute WORST theme song I've ever heard.
Also a lot of what the other guys said. I did laugh at it when he said 'do you want fries with that' but the characters were too one dimensional