Honestly,
You have potential, and this may have potential as a series!
Honestly,
You have potential, and this may have potential as a series!
wow
really good for your first flash!! so much potential!
hey
not bad for a first animation
Keep working.
I'm seeing LOTS of potential here. Not saying this is at all bad. Does need improvement, but for your first flash, this is amazing. Most of the motion in the video were very fluent and moved very well. I honestly can't tell you what improvements are needed. Just keep touching up, and keep animating.
Very nice..
I can guess that you used photoshop at times, like for the grass and some coloring.. Really well done, perfect first animation.