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I'll give you a point for that fact it works, but besides that, this is not good. It lack any actual story to it whatsoever, it just replays over and over again, considering you never attempted at a play or replay button at all, and the artwork it just horrific. A third grader could've made better artwork than that, pardon me saying so. And it's just a 5-second flash, for goodness sake! You couldn't have sprung for anything longer?!
There's a bevy of things you could do to improve this thing, starting with an actual PLOTLINE. That's generally one thing that's a must. And perhaps attempting to make a decent artwork for it would be a good thing to do as well. And if i must say, add a freaking preloader! or perhaps keep it from looping, that 5-second music gets annoying after a while. Hold up...
*turns off speakers*
Much better... look, I'm sorry for being so rough, but if you're gonna try and make a flash movie, you gotta remember it's not about if YOU enjoy it. You got to understand that the Newgrounds community is a fickle bunch. Next time, put a little effort into it!