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Reviews for "Story of the Blanks"

Where do i click to make it start?

Donitz responds:

The play button should appear when the pre-loader is done. Otherwise an error appeared which I'm still unable to reproduce. Sorry.

Too frustrating having to read all the dialog OVER AND OVER every time I die. Thank God I can just go to Youtube and watch some other poor soul play through this unfun game. However it is functional.

im having trouble with the fast one in the begining

The simple graphics design hid a very shallow story with next to no suspense or any form of horror that would be considered horrifying to anyone above the age of 6.
Working on what you have? Try lengthening the game a bit and add some form of actual suspense. Running from.. what are they.. Zombie Ponies? That's not going to create a sense of horror or suspense.
You also seemed to have implemented a type of mini-quest function, finding the crank and the red gem, but you could have taken this further and made them seem larger, gave them more impact. Something along the lines of having to find the key to the door to leave the house, or finding new paths and alternate ways outside of the path you came into because it's blocked now? Experiment a bit. Play other games and find what feels good to you, and implement it in your newer games (should you still be making them)

Fucking ponies

can't fucking escape them

I mean, it's not even a good game, the dialogue is terrible, the graphics are godawful, and i don't mean that in a "hurr durr 8-bit" way i mean everything is tiled terribly, and paths in the town thing at the first part are horribly laid out, nothing aligns right, and the music is annoying. At least add a mute button.

Donitz responds:

Thanks for the review! I just wanted to mention that the mute button is M.