Cute!
You drew the dragon wings like feathered bird wings, instead of reptile dinosaur wings that most people use, which makes them look delicate and cooler... Anyway, your drawing style is awesome, and with a story like that you can't help but feel sorry for them...
But in general, the story was rather short. I was hoping for a learning to fly video but it went in a completely different way... Sad, unfortunately. The sound was a major problem too... I understand that you had syncing problems but the laughing mid track completely threw me off... Great job but it needs work