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Reviews for "School Assignment - Fish"

oh no

it has abad loop.but hey the more flash you do the better youll get :)

haha!

Congrats on your first award! :D

In all seriousness though, this is very bad. As the sound is set to event, when the movie loops there are two sounds of the same playing at once. Contrary to what is written in the flash, the handwriting was horrible, as was the animation (all tweens) and the art. The writing on the fish tank at the beginning went way too fast. Improve, and look at an animation first before you submit and ask yourself "will people like this? Is it even any good?". No hard feelings though.

Of course this may just be more spam...

cowsgomooand responds:

Shhh, the handwriting part was sarcasm, besides, what can you expect from my first animation ever made.

Ever.

There is like five songs on out of sinc.

Wow, this is the best TotW that I have seen (look at the reward to understand the acronym). The repeating music is really bad. Handwritten font is cool if it is done well, there is a text tool for flash. The animation is boring, the crack is unexplained and the fishes' color is explained instead. The music, even one layer of it, doesn't represent the flash. Also, consider having the fish bowl explode and have the fish flood out, or something else that would provide some action with this thing.