nice
I find it refreshing that this is moving into something better than mainstream stick fight garbage. That being said I would like to see backgrounds that are more than a white screen with a couple black lines. This is especially important because 2 of the three characters are black. Also that dream sequence didn't transition very well when I first saw it I thought it was unrelated to the rest of the flash. if your v-caming it anyway you might as well blur the transition and make it clear its all in his head by moving away from a thought bubble. As you are going against mainstream anyway, maybe you can consider getting voices for your characters.
Now when all crits are said and done I really like this series and where it is going.