Pretty good...
Like the story was great, the animation was pretty damn good, but....
It was just to slow. Like in the beginning I understood that you were just
playing around in minecraft looking for wheat, but maybe make it go by a bit faster and maybe just inform the viewer your goal, yeah I get the title, but you shouldn't inform someone of something that vital in the story just through the title.
There were a few parts like the fight that went by at a good pace except for at the beginning when she was getting mad, I mean just make those kind of scenes short and sweet.
Overall I thought it was a great animation and hope to see you do more in the future! :)