nice animation
But there is no depth to the voice acting. It's too mono and slow. It's need sound like you were actually saying it, not just reading off of a script. Because of that it just got boring fast and the punchline kind of withered away by the end.
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My only complaint is the acting was terrible.
Haha noted
not that funny
there was a liitle joke at the end but still not funny
tweak it just a little and........
The animation was amazing! just that the voice acting needs a little work. I mean, EMPHASIZE! I never really caught on to the despair and joys of becoming a sudden millionaire. The story line didn't catch my interest that much either, how were you supposed to know that the hamster had been a slacker or a lazybum with a capital "L"? My suggestions are:
1. Work on the emotion of the main character. You've got to feel his joy then despair yourself.
2. Add a little beginning story or something to show us what kind of hamster he is or was. For example, go back in time a bit in your story and show us younger joe and his goals. Have they changed or maintained?, or have him in your hamster community doing a tradition when the full grown hamsters leave the nest. that tradition should be something like asking what they want to be.
Then Joe (when his turn comes.) says he wants to be a millionaire without having to do anything. The community laughs and mocks him making him embarassed and mad. THEN, lead into the story you've made any way you like.
I'm not saying the animation is awful. I'm just saying a little improvement would make this animation go from 6 to 1 MILLION! Otherwise not bad. If you feel like I'm critisizing then do whatever you want with this animation, I'm not forcing you to make changes. Either way it's TERRIFIC! GREAT JOB ;)
Ehh.
The animation was alright on a technical level, but the acting was pretty uninspired; it need more "oomph," more character. Plus, the guinea pigs look kind of weird with long fingers and primate feet.