A lot of misused potential.
I can clearly see how much effort you put into this and frankly it's nice.
But the rhythm of the story is somewhat boring and trying to hard to be funny.
The animation is great.
The idea is original.
The humor is pushing and tiring eventually.
The punch "I will eat your corpse" is trying to be random but expected.
Animation is great just work on your scripting a litlle.
Despite what I said it will get a mark, at least 5th place because it is good.
Good luck,
Max-Pain