Descent
It seemed rushed, take more time and try to put a bit more detail into the story. I thought it was alright for a first try though.
Reviews for "Pokemon Adventure Ep. 1"
im sorry...
...but i don't want to watch some one play pokemon dont misinterpret this but work on it
Clozal responds:
I get what you mean, I really want to make it better.
thanks for rating and commenting though.