pretty good
the artwork was pretty good and so was what started off as a story but it might just be me but what the point of the sound effects in the beginning when they barely seem to relate to the comic itself? anyways good work and i hope you continue with the comic cant wait to see what it becomes
Good, Now what?
This might be good, that is if there was more. Where is the rest?
Very cool!
I like your art style and knowledge of perspective. Great job on getting me interested in who the characters are and what they are doing.
Most music would become a disturbance, but another idea would be to let certain panels contain background noise or ambience. For example, if a page of the comic took place in a rainy jungle, maybe you'd hear the drops falling and some of the wildlife noises. Just another way to pull the audience into your world.
I'm interested to see what happens next!
Very nice
Never seen a web comic on newgrounds, I'm actually looking forward to seeing the next issue. Good dialog btw
I like it!