good art
I really liked the art but hated the story.. if there was one at all.
I think you should make another animation using the same art style but with an acual story this time, and the page constantly moving up and down was a little annoying, it would also be nice if you could improve the sound quality a little bit, the crackling in the back round works for some animations but thats only if its constant. not continuously cutting out and then coming back.