Suspense is shattering. I won't sleep for a while.
You have some amazing talent in creating fear and suspense within the viewer. Also, an excellent choice of choosing to base it off real facts. That got me all the more scared ( 'cause usually I don't get scared unless it is based on facts.)
I loved the bit where he was chatting with his friend, then the creepy pedophile woman appeared behind him and molested him. (nah, just kidding. It was pretty scary.)
The storyline is quite stunning and original. However to add an extra tinge of atmosphere to the viewer, try to improve the shading and add some blurs. Due to the fact that the character's colours were always one tone (each colour was the same) made me a bit less scared, although it being any scarier and I
would've not watched it.
Overall it's great and has awesome atmosphere, but maybe change the creepy monster from something other than a off tone pedophile woman. Please.
Overall Score: 8/10 3/5
Animation and Graphics: Lots of room for improvement. Shading, blurs and other animations such as shifting or something are all options. But not a huge issue.
Sound: It had me scared. Seriously, this adds so much to the general atmosphere and feeling. A big factor in this flash and you scored it.
Summary: This flash has a great atmosphere and thrilling suspense. The sound effects are dead-on, although you might consider putting more into the graphics.
