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Reviews for "Checkerboard #3"

Your best stuff by far

I remember you showing me this one, It has some awsome color, i love the red, and its pretty, to look at, post more stuff soon, you only have a few things up here, anyways, Toodles....

XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks as always

~X~

Interesting

The 3d effect is working well for this one. The only 3d weirdness seems to be around the door though, it doesn't look as 3d as the rest of the room.

The color scheme is simple, but it works out well. The shine effect is a bit spotty, but it looks nice still and gives it much more life.

The door that looks like its giving off the light looks a bit odd, the "star" in the center of it looks cool, but could use ever so slightly more detail.

Keep up the good work! =3

-Review Request Club

XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks

~X~

Pretty good...

It's better than your other piece, for sure, and looks really nice overall. Good job.

The colours are great, except the colour next to the portal, IMO. I think that sort of dull brown-ish colour sort of contrasted too much with the red and black. Why don't you try some sort of checkers pattern around the portal, some black and red texture showing a pattern of checkers coins or something. Other than thatm very nice colours, and the shading was very good around the corners, plus the light effect was nicely done.

Great job with the texture on the tiles, they look a lot like marble, and really add a lot to the piece. I also really liked the 3D effect you did here, it was excellently done. Sadly, this picture is rather small, so I can't enjoy it in its full detail when it's so small. The portal itself was drawn pretty well, though, and a cool concept too.

What put this down to eight was practically the rather contrasting colour around the portal and the size of this picture, but when it comes to the shading, texture, concept, colours in general and 3D effects, you're great. Keep it up.
8/10

-Review Request Club-

XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks for a nice review its nice to get these kinds

~X~

At the end of the tunnel

A nice piece, with great use of perspective and shading to bring a nice effect to the secondary border with the piece. I personally think that the frame that you put around it is certainly a good, simple effort and the best way to improve would have been to make the piece slightly bigger than a postcard.

The shading in the corridor / tunnel is good, looking at the way that the doorway would produce shaded areas, but it doesn't allow for perspective that way - the shadows would get closer to the wall and possibly even disappear altogether by the front edge. A nice set of stone effects across the whole of the piece, possibly leading me to believe that you could do with a greater variation in textures, just to give the impression of different materials used in the construction.

A marked improvement on #2 ;)

[Review Request Club]

XwaynecoltX responds:

Thanks

~X~

Too bad it's so small

I like this picture. The lightening is pretty nice and the door (or the portal?) creates a nice atmosphere.
It almost seems as if the room is spinning around me while I try to reach that door.

Pity the picture is so small though. I think it loses quite a bit of it's atmosphere because of the size. If it was bigger, then it would work much better.

{ Review Request Club }

XwaynecoltX responds:

yeah i worked hard on the lighting anyways thanks for the review

~X~