Mr. Chocolate
I love the concept of animating stand up comedy, and this was well executed. But I came across certain quirks that got to me.
1. It was slightly too long. This would be a perfect enterprise to animate single jokes, or the best part of a joke. I know comedians take their time explaining their situations, but it can get awkward between the connection of a live performance put to animation, which brings me to number 2.
2. The animation in general was fantastic, but it got awkward in certain points when animating the alternative situations, which would normally be acceptable with the comedian's pauses in live performance.
Either way, I think you did a great job in general. Maybe try other comedians too. And great job. I love your parents.