Hear me out!
This is bad. It doesn't even qualify as experimental, because there is clear story here. It's more developmental. But That's not why it is bad. It is bad because the violence is not justified, and it a little too much. You animated this very well, but It is not good because you go a little over board and do things that don't make sense. I'm sorry, but keep making more animations but try a little less violence. I hope this review is helpful.