Idea is good, could use more eye candy
I enjoyed the ending and particularly the final image of the girl at the end.
A few things bugged me tho, I think that it woulda been cool to have had more animation in it. like i dont mind that youre in one scene the whole time, but maybe when hes looking at each character, the character actually turns to him or something. Felt like you blew your load just making the intro and rain drops rather than the heart of the animation.