Reviews for Inner Darkness

[cyrussoreal]

aww.. what happened to her?

This is a first for me as far as writing reviews for art on the newgrounds site. When I checked out your submission from last month 'Annika' the newgrounds site would seem to start getting more talented submissions.

First thing I noticed is differences in focus points in your subject. Like... the etheral facial features contrasted alot with the fine details in the armor she wore. Any more contrasting differences and both points would seemed detached. Its a good thing you went as far as you did and not any further. Great choice of background. The entire person seemed to 'pop' right out of the canvas.

I would love it if the armor details were just as smokey as the rest of her but the hardness emotion was well understood. I just wished that there were something 'just a little bit' recognizable that would make it obvious she is the same person as 'Anneka' in the other submission.

As far as the title goes, maybe darkness would describe her further down the line after she went through the wringer a bit more. This moment in the picture seemed more emotionless and 'cold'. I can definitely feel a back story in the 'potential' Anneka series.

[CliffRacer]

cool pic but sorry cuz

AWW dang it! woted accidentally for 2 when I had to vote for 4

[bobshadow2]

On my screen it's a little blurry, but it still looks good.

[Ericho]

It looks like you are in fact turning this into an actual story. Well, it uses the same character at least. Look, if you're making someone as loved as this, you should make a cartoon out of it! I can just see you winning every positive award out there. From the title, I thought this was going to be something disgusting. Like, you would talk about her literal insides.

I am so glad you did not. You get to learn so much from this one image. She seems to be slowly turning less carefree as the pictures go on. Well, I don't know their chronological order. The colors are wonderfully bright too.

[raike]

I love it she is beautyfu