nice
little tooshort but amazing art work well done!! :D
Reviews for "The Bench."
Great animation, but needs some cinematic elements
I love your drawing style and animation style - very very pretty! I have two small pieces of advice...
1) I would have liked to have seen some more camera angles. The initial shot is a great establishing shot, but the bench is so small, that it does not draw your eye to the action very well. Maybe drop into a closeup of each of them before the vortex man pops up.
2) Sound design could have been a little richer - more ambiance, accurate footsteps, etc. Sound can elevate your piece :)
These are both small and do not detract much from the piece. Again, great animation style, you're a very talented animator and designer. Keep up the great work!
Great animating - Had much, much more potential
Your animating is obviously very good, and you know perfectly well how to make a decent animated short. Though, it was short, and I think with the ability seen here, you could of easily made something better and perhaps longer that focused aswell on storytelling, which would make it more enjoyable I think. I liked it regardless, though.
7/10.
The third character who popped up, with a white swirl where his face should be, and the rest of his body black, where have I seen him before? maybe I just saw someone similar to him.