Original was better in my opinion!
Really sorry, but I think original Jerry was better, because:
1.) The "what is up with..."-jokes aren't that funny, and they actually move the focus from the main theme of the cartoon (being the monotone life one can lead - at least that's what I interpreted) to something far less interesting (being the silly one-liner),
2.) The one-liner think it makes Jerry look silly, also deducting from the strength of the theme of the cartoon,
3.) The original had no speech, also strengthening the theme of the cartoon.
I did like Jerry 2 though. The art/drawing style was fine (a bit mediocre, but ok), the voice acting was really good and the story was nice as well. Therefore giving you 7/10 and 3/5.