like the style...
...but the film was too short and simple to say it was more than "ok". There have been great mini films like that in the past, so i dont think that this is something new. I love your art style though, it looks fresh! I look forward to see bigger stories and a more storyline!
The animation was great! Pretty funny, too.
you're a better animator than I writer haha
the animation style was good, really original.
but that joke wasn't that funny at all.
keep it up. Maybe get somebody to wright something for you. that's what I do sometimes.
Peace.
Paper Mario!
I loved that lil game on N64... would have been cool if you... um wrote some more material.. but them again iassume the animating took quite awile as is
Great art with a sub par joke
I love the style of the art but like a few people said before the punchline wasn't that good. The ascetics of the flash are great the voices are great, the sounds fit nicely and the art is really captivating. The flash is quite short but I don't really mind. This looks like a flash that could be the start of something great. If you want this series to be successful it might be a good idea to have the jokes reviewed before hand. I'm sure there are people on the fourms that would be glad to help hone your script. If you work on your jokes just a bit more I could really see this becoming a popular series.