Ok like,
I like just like have to say this, like I liked it. You dont like see these like kinda animations like too often, When you like talk to like a friend who like likes likes to tell funny storys.
lol Im jk I had to do that, now its out of my system. Anywho I loved the animation you did and the story was interesting all the way through.
Keep recording conversations and animating because you have somthing there.