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Reviews for "Artworks Sexhibition"

Good but could be better

English isn't exactly the best. Sounds rather funny.
The arrow thing with the mouse is... annoying.

Palm reading section really needs instructions.

Good quality sex though.

Not liking it as much as I want to

Don't get me wrong, the premise of the game works for me. It's just your game seems to fail on the delivery of that premise. It doesn't have the same excellent presentation that VadimGOD's presentations have (sometimes). There are a lot of problems that need fixing up.

First, why do I have to move my mouse over the arrow to move into a certain location within the gallery or whatever? Why can't I just click on the arrow? It seems like an odd change to rather traditional controls. I don't mind odd innovative steps if they make sense or improve the game. But this just seems awkward with no real benefit to your game at all.

Second, the palm-reading thing was done horridly. It felt like a dressed-up loading screen if anything. Why can't I just click on the line I want to read and do the poorly written dialogue instead of clicking it multiple times all over the damn line? Honestly, I think the whole section is a bit unnecessary and there are better ways to get to the sexy bits. But the reason the palm-reading fails is because of the dialogue.

Third, your dialogue is actually pretty bad. I don't want to sound like a fan, but VG's dialogue reads at least similar to how actual people would talk in a casual conversation. But here I don't feel like these people are like that. They come off rather business and professional like. If you want to sex someone up, I don't think that's the proper tone to have. Maybe edit the writing a bit? It just felt off the whole time.

Lastly, the positions available are nice, but why can I only choose one set instead of being able to go through one set, and then go back to do the other without restarting the game? I'm just saying that more options would be nice.

I don't mean to come off hating this game as much as I sound. It has potential to be good, but it is rather lacking in games that have done similar things and done so in a better way. Good attempt and here's hoping the next one is a masterpiece or close to it.