Geez...
For goodness sakes, how come I find it I'm the only one reviewing. Well, I started like this too, and actually you use to be my only reviewer lol.
I probably would have liked this more if there was a bass drum or bass percussion. I love the rhythm though. It's a very catchy tune. Who ever makes Mario tunes sure do know how to make a jingle.
You probably could have done more with this than what you did. Therefore, I advise you to keep on keepin' on!