Huh?
Your grammar and punctuation suck. It makes the story hard to understand.
Huh?
Your grammar and punctuation suck. It makes the story hard to understand.
:O:o
Dude, for your first flash thats amazing.If that were me i woudnt have even known what to do!!! (I do now)
Its not bad
well the start is good but u made the fighting scene to long, that killed it for me.