Great potential!
I am no animator myself but i know a good flash when i see one. Things i'd say this needs work are the backgrounds. (more detailed)
And the animations like the lipsynching could be a bit better!
I'd also put in more jokes ofcourse making it a longer flash movie.
But that's all! I would love to see a better version of this!
Don't Give Up
Could be a lot better if you kept at it after all this time. You're not the only guy around here who likes to pick on the Ultimate Warrior, Macho-Man Randy Savage. Actually, a Mario parody sans sprites is quite rare, though there are a few, so props for staying out of the slush-pile.
My condolences to your brother, by the way.
ahhh
i did something you guys never need to do ever, rate before the movie is finished
If i would have seen that the movie ended like that, i would have rated less
PD: the movie was going great at the beginning
Sorry about your bro...
I wouldn't want to animate either if I lost one of my brothers.....
Anyway, about your animation. I would say that in terms of animation-motion you've got that down. However, if you're gonna make jokes, you've definitely gonna need more comical facial expressions for your characters. Also, I would suggest you add a bit more colour to your characters, a bit more shadow on different areas (experiment with this) so they look more 3D (unless you were actually aiming for 2D). The shotgun thing made me laugh, but longer would be better next time. Kudos and good luck.
Ah yes I see the comical facial expressions. Adding more color as far as shading or just making them more vibrant? Yeah I was thinking about adding shadows but I got really lazy and felt it would add more time movie but I guess someone did notice. I am glad you liked that joke I fleshed out a few other ideas that involved mario but with everything happening I just lost interest but still wanted feedback on the animation. Thanks!
Not bad
Not that bad, animation could have been smoother, and the syncing with the voices could have been better, but again you also said it was complete. Good job through, looks like it has potential. I liked the bit about Macho Man, I didn't know anyone else remembered who he was, lol jk
Yeah the voice syncing was actually really hard because the timing was off. I tried hard to get both the voice matched up as well but I was trying to be fast when I was actually working on this project. I love Macho Man he's awesome. I was going to have the kool-aid man come into the movie and have them argue but my interest just got lost. Thanks!