Must have been difficult
I can see you put a lot of work into this, but unfortunately everything just looked way too busy, especially on such a small screen. It was pretty headache-inducing. There was just too many things moving at once. For the full project, I'd recommend less clutter so that the important points can receive the audience's full attention.
Opinion
I believe the animation, lighting, and foil coming out of the mouths was awesome, plus you are really good at working clay. But. . . .
I can see something going on, yet you had no plot to me this was just a bunch of randomness. It just like a wordless book, there's lots of pictures you don't see the main character alone, there are hands in the way, and it's over before it even begins. I was going to give you a 8 but after reading what I wrote I'm going to bring it down to a 6.
Sorry, But keep up with the clay motions and everything. You should just throw in some audio some goofy ass friends and other than that.
GOOD JOB!
~Mufflore~
A lot of effort in there
I'm gonna be honest. You didn't plan your animation at all, did you? I mean, i like when there's a lot of random stuff happening, it's really spontaneous, but it didn't fit the claymotion you made. In my point of view, you should make a better planned video and even pay more attention to the character poses and movement they are going to make, sometimes i can't predict what the characters are gonna do, i mean there's no anticipation involved. You put a lot of effort in your animation, but honestly it wasn't good... it didn't got my attention and i'm not gonna remember it tomorrow!
Keep it up, you've got skills, patience and you really stick to your work until the end, which is awesome and not many people do these days.
too random
i give it 3 for being unique but i had no idea what was going on or anything just random crap.