Wonderful composition Jabicho!
You better let her hear this :)
Reviews for "The Girl that Makes me Smile"
Jabicho responds:
Hey, thanks Mattashi! :D
I'm making sure she does :)
Really pretty piece, I really like the quiet violins you bring in in the background. Looking forward to hearing more from you!
Jabicho responds:
Thanks so much! It means a lot
It starts of rather basic, but that ending was really inspirational! I don't have much to comment on this since I can't see any flaws. I like how it starts out basic and soft and gets louder and faster with a broader array of notes towards the end. And it goes from high-pitch to low and warm, with added strings in the background that give it an almost orchestra-ish feeling. I think it would have been perfect if the song ended at 2:10, right when it's as best; the pinnacle passed. Overall though it's great music, smooth and beautiful; I think a favorite. Nice work!
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Jabicho responds:
Hi cyberdevil!
Thanks so much man, for listening and for your words, they mean a lot!
I'm happy you like it!
This is why love should be illegal. Makes us lonely people feel so crippled inside. When we want some, and see the signifiers, but can't have none. Dope piano piece though. Sorry, I got self indulgent for a moment there... Its very very pretty.
Jabicho responds:
Man, I feel your pain, guess we all go through those moments, where it hurts so bad to feel lonely. Thanks for checking my piece! It means a lot, I'm happy you liked it
This is a beautiful piece. Puts a smile on my face and makes me think of better days to come.
The melody makes me think of meeting someone who just seems to make you feel warm inside by just being themself and accepting you for you at the same time. Slowly feelings become friendship, and then grows into hanging out more and more, and finally wanting to be together forever and make each other happy by simply being happy together.
The violin coming in is beautiful and really hits up the much needed high notes to make this song sound inspirational. Using headphones makes this song feel much more atmospheric.
Overall, no flaws or ways to improve this song. Beautiful work.
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Jabicho responds:
Hi STE3, thanks so much for your words! they mean a lot.
I love how you described how the melody was growing, since I felt it was the same description that I felt while writing it.