it showed promise from the start
after just blamming 5 video's in a row I seen this and thought, nice this looks good and the pleasant thought continued as he raised his gun to the sky and ranted, then the gun stayed there and held position and held and held then the ranting stopped and the mouth kept going a mile a minute, for a few seconds then I heard a gun shot and the guy flew around for second and that was it.... ok so first and only tip keep the start then after 2 seconds of holding the gun up and ranting change EVERYTHING after that.
oh yeah btw cerial if a food you pour milk over for breakfest, serial killer is a preson who repeats murder in the same fashion at least 3 times... hope I got firstise on pointing that out xD