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:'(
It's a very well written song, but i whant to hear more of you'r voice. So if you could turn down the piano playing and let you'r voice out some more. I like how you put some more power at the end in the last sentence. I give you 4 stars for it :)
Great work anyways! Keep it up
thanks very much, i appreciate the tips, I'm always on the lookout for advice, il take it onboard and give it a little remix soon, also expect more stripped down piano stuff soon if you enjoyed it, i write pretty much everything on piano these days, but then when it comes to recording i have to change to synth stuff because midi pianos sounds like children's toys and i struggle playing real piano to a metronome, and by doing this my songs lose a lot of their oomph (even if they do gain an element of funkiness) thanks again