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Reviews for "ABC Happy Time"

It was so so

It wasn't that great, it was good, but not great. Kind of a dark humor cliché, it didn't really stand out in my opinion. The animations was quite well preformed in newgrounds standards, and here too, it was good but not great. One thing you should think about while animating is to have the thumb on the right side of the hand when he flips the camera the finger. The best part about the whole thing was the song, I liked that it went from being mostly the usual children song stuff to be more of his own bitter reality.

FUCK HIM AND HIS DICK

and the horse he rode in on

xD LMAO!!!

This is so freakin funny!!! xD Lol Keep up the good work!

Woow

Well its simply a guy going nuts becourse of his cheating wife in a kids-show... see you dont need so much nonsense bla bla like the review under mine.

Anyway i liked the build up and the climax was obvious but well done.

Not The Best Send-off piece...

Things that I liked about the flash: first and foremost, if you were indeed setting out for shock value, you hit the ball out of the park on that one. You could say the ending was somewhat telegraphed, but it still is an ending that slaps you in the face.

The song is performed in a way that the transition between the adult lyrics and the kid lyrics is fairly seamless. The easy way out would have been to over-exaggerate the adult lyrics. This shows a good sense of comic timing.

Things I didn't like: the animation seemed herky-jerky at times, where it feels too much like a flash animation from 2004 instead of 2010. The material... well, the kids host with a dark side has been done before. While the joke was told well, it wasn't a particularly new way of telling it. And I didn't care for the shock ending, even if it was done well. That seems to be the only reason for this piece to have been made, is to shock with the ending.

The last piece of yours I viewed, "Prostitute Mickey 4," treated the characters very effectively. When Mickey breaks down near the end, I actually felt bad for him. That's effective storytelling. In this flash, there's no attempt made to get the viewer to sympathize with the character. You could have just cut out the song and gone straight for the ending and the result would have been the same.

I've come to expect early Peter Jackson-ish dark humor from your pieces. This isn't your best use of dark humor. Dark humor and shock works best when there is context and strong character portrayal, which this piece lacked. As a scene in a larger piece of work, this could work. But as a stand-alone piece, it's too much of an old joke before a quick and exploitative punch line.

Keep incorporating one element that makes your dark sense of humor hit home: your ability to make characters that aren't so one-dimensional and predictable.

Jonnyethco responds:

Eh... we just wanted to make a kids song.