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Reviews for "IN DREAMS 01 (fixed)"

Great first game!

I do enjoy the game, and look forward to it being completed, but I do have my own irks and comments about the game.

1) With Ranma, the dick's too big and goes more through her face, not her mouth.

2) Beginning could be cut down but its good.

3) Great flash art, especially for it being your first time.

4) Rock paper Scissors is too fast? it was nearly impossible for me to notice what gesture it was on.

johandark responds:

1) mmm yep... that´s true... that´s because when i draw the felation i should draw it by lateral... and in this point of view (3/4) is more difficult to draw it with such a big penis... ... sorry xD

2) ... yep... I should... that´s a big mistake...

3) Thank you very much ^^

4) mmmm... well.. I try to make it difficult.. but probaly i did it too much... the problem here is that I tried to do it by programig a little different from the rest.. and I get a little confused in the making... xD

Thanks for your comment :P I´ll try to do my best next time.

Some advice if you're still looking for someone to finish this game: Try the game development forums at futanari palace. The forum caters to some rather... specific tastes, but the game development area isn't just for futa.

johandark responds:

I don´t find the link you are telling me... :S I´m lost in the forum... xD

Awesome game, is it finished yet?

johandark responds:

No, sorry this game was done in 2007-2009 and sadly I couldn´t find help to finish it and my programming skills on flash were not enough.

Now I´m doing a new videogame with Ren´py called "Pact with a witch". I hope you can enjoy that one. Here you can take a look at it: https://www.patreon.com/jonnymelabo

Thanks for your comment!

its ok

you need to finish but i think the guy could look different. he looks like a blob insted of a person

johandark responds:

Hummm... well I thought doing this game the guy would be the less importnat... xD in his moment was that my thought xD

Confused

In the author comments you forgot to add Ranma 1/2 (Ranma)
The beginning sequnce was rather dull and drawn out. As you were making a hentai, a simple "Im 20 and still a virgin! Man I wish something good/interesting would come my way" would have sufficed instead of his constant whining about how unlucky he is. Then you say that getting a girl drunk till she is on the verge of passing out makes her a wh*** I disagree. I say it makes you a rapist as alcohol takes away her ability to consent to sex. Moving on. Wtf with android 18. You tell her to take her clothes off so you can buy them and she agrees?! That is messed up. Penis shaped fruit. I expected that from a description of "strange fruit" I just hope the end product doesnt have you using it on sakura cause then you have to give it to Lum and that just grosses me out. Poor Utena. Knocked out cold. I can already guess what happens next. Ranma's part started out funny and good. Yeah I poured water on you because a strong alien told me too. Priceless. Then it went downhill. Free sex over a game of rock paper scissors and man what a bloodfest. The mood is constantly ruined by all the plz don't continue/ Im still going cause you want it segments. I just want a friggin infinite animated loop of simple good sex. Then to top all of it off. Your character looks like he weighs 300lbs and has a monster penis which he says is a normal 28 centimeters which equals 0.88 of a foot which makes no sense. Artwork is really good but all the sex scenes aren't how a normal human should try to have sex. I don't enjoy this.

johandark responds:

I´m amaized for your commentary... i´ve never read a thing like this... you played all entery game!! Describing every part... Luckily you did not like it... but you played all!!! amazing... your criticism is really good. I must admit that when i started with the game.. i have no idea about what the hell i would explain about... not even wich characters i would put in... not even what the hell would happen with them... just i was doing... Because in fact, i had never imagined upload this game... Just.. i did.

I apreciate your 4. and your comment really much.

P.D.

I´m really sorry for the blood on Ranma 1/2... but.. i was in a bad time in my life. and well.. i just make a little dirty gross violent sex... yep. xD