Reviews for I Got No Money

[yesysh]

wow

you really let me down you have to color your animations well and you need to show more effective ways of showing us your story like when your character looks at the window to see the flat screen you could of shown the people inside.What im about you type right now is very important: instead of doing an animation that took you 3-4hours do a kick ass one that took you 3-4 days to make + you need to do the story bords for your animation(story bord:helps you to plan the scens of the animation).Oh try to do frame by frame animation hand drawn if possible and remember the 12 principles of animation there very very very important every good animation use them so learn the 12 principles of animation and dont forget them ok

Yusuf responds:

FUK U

[turtleco]

mediocre

it could really use some work.

First off, the song choice is okay. Next, the art, its clearly rushed, and pretty bad. The houses are ridiculous. Are houses really that close together? are their windows that big? are they connected to the sidewalk with no driveway? no. You should really put more time into this stuff. Their is some really lazy stuff in here. You reuse a lot of the animation, and there is a lot of spots that have nothing happening, (I thought it froze when there was the closeup on the guys face after he winked at the girl) show the girl giving him a discouraging look, show the people watching the tv, show him reaching into his pocket, etc, etc etc...

keep working on it.

Yusuf responds:

k, thanks

[Tates79]

hmm

it's no shopping penguin

Yusuf responds:

what's your point? Go watch that damn "shopping penguin" then.

[someplaceelse]

It wasn't too bad!

K first off I want to start by saying, telling people that you are 11 years old is not going to cut you any slack. Most people, like me, don't review based on age, and some people even review harsher.

Alright, the video was not bad. :) I liked some of the way you carried out the flash. Like the scene with the iphone where the view is directed toward the ground, is, in my opinion pure genius.

However, there are some things that really bugged me, like (and this has be said before, and I'm pretty sure your tiered of it) the art, witch isn't the worst, but would look better cleaned up, shaded, etc.

Another thing that bugged me was the fact that you didn't draw the girl in that one scene. Don't be afraid to draw women XD!

and I don't like Perry Gipp's music, but that's just my opinion, so you can keep him if you want.

But hey, your movies are practically overflowing with potential. So keep them coming. :)

Also, score doesn't matter people don't have an exact reason to why they gave you what score they gave you. What really counts is making the flash, getting feed back, and the rest.

So yah... sorry for the long review, but I really hope you read it! XD

Yusuf responds:

thanks :)

[Ishkabibbles]

could be better

Most of it's repetitive animation. Try to make more frame by frame and make it longer.

Yusuf responds:

even if it was better, you'd still give it the same criticism, so it's all the same to me.
2018 edit: the "repetitive animation" criticism was actually fairly valid. but I was a literal child, so my old response is not that surprising.