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Reviews for "My Life as a Duck (v1.0)"
Diggit.
The art style was simple, but great. The poems were recorded well. It was genuinely funny. Good work. The only thing I would have changed would be to omit the last line in the 2nd poem on Cap'n Crunch. I think that had you left it at "Makes the pain go away," not only would the lasting effect of it been funnier, but it would have sounded better. Your delivery on that line was classic. I was laughing a lot by that point and then "the sound of my addiction" sort of cut the laughter short. Keep up the good work, though. I want to see more of your stuff.
Beautifully done, Mr. Elliot
Since all of these reviews are raves, you must already be hard at work on the next one. Cant wait to see it. This was tres stylie, and set a definite mood. The writing is hee-larry-us, ala Patton Oswalt, or Jeffrey Ross. Keep it up, sunshine, you may get a number one slot.
TheEvilRabbit responds:
Awww... you guys...
[wipes away a tear]
Who says poetry has to be sweet?
Ni--ce, the only thing I could really suggest is more poem selections, and more of a beat, but then again, that's going into the beatnik scene, which would actually go in nice with your setting. But nice wrap up with the last poem; right from the heart.
Very funny
This is well worth watching as it has strengthen my faith it poetry and song.