Kinda Weak
Voice acting was bad, especially the jigsaw voice.
Next time you do it, try speaking louder but not directly into the mic as to avoid the loud peaking sections.
Santas voice was ok but whenever he was in pain it was much softer than when he spoke which was kinda weird.
Climbing the wall was kinda pointless, could've just made the walls close faster and him climb without falling, would've had the same effect.
3 for effort though, there's some potential here.
Love the concept thats for sure
Nice first submission man. Few things I'm sure your aware by now that you need to work on is your voice actor decision, and of course refining your animation skills. Again I love the idea, it just falls short in those regards.
Love the concept.
Voice acting ruined it. Saw's voice wasnt a voice, but more of a loud white noise. Noises like that mess with my brain. I almost broke down because the low, deep, whisper, was tormenting my SOUL.
The wall climb was annoying. How many times did he fall... 6? 7? I dont remember. It was rather obnoxious.
When Santa was "screaming," it sounded like he was punched in the stomach so he couldnt breathe. He had his legs and arm torn off(unrealistically, at that)!
Ahh... what Im saying is that it needs work. Alot of work. Dont bother with me, Im just some Internet nobody who is like many others. I loved the concept though, just needs a bit of spit n polish.
Seeing as this is your first, GREAT effort. Up there was the critic in me, so dont take it the wrong way. Also, many congratulations on getting your first submission frontpaged! That really is awesome.
Flame me if I sounded harsh, but please know that my intentions are pure. Merry Christmas(though its a few hours past), and have a good one, mate. :D
okey good for the first attempt
the flash alone was kinda good but i was dissapointed at the voice acting
Hey
Hey man
Don't get disheartened, you had some good ideas here and this was a great flash considering it was your first attempt.
Congrats on the front page! Keep it up and one day you will might become a great flash artist. Merry Christmas!