lol
wasthe guy prank calling himand went to far
Reviews for "Magic School Bus: ep3"
What a twisted spin off of nostalgia ~
And for the record, Carlos was always an idiot.
Jonimator responds:
only so much can change in a year ;P
Can't wait for Episode 4
This is really funny. I wonder how the whole school knows about the magic school bus, and I like how all the kids are hysterical in Dave's class after they went through Miss Frizzle's class, and there's an idea there.
Who are the new students that Miss Frizzle's teaching?
Yes, Carlos is an idiot now.
meh
it wasn't that good, overall I think the quality of the writing and the jokes have diminished since the first one you made. It's annoying when the jokes aren't even related to the TV show and every punch line is "no this is not mrs. frizzle's class". This idea was basically good for 1 joke, but if you keep repeating the same stuff over and over it's not funny.
Furthermore, a GOOD parody would be if you ACTUALLY parodied the TV show instead of just some random stuff no one cares about, I don't understand how you can only repeat the same jokes over and over when there are so many things to make fun of when you actually watch the show. It's just not funny to do a parody of it with no references to anything but the 2 dimensional personalities of the children.
I DO give you credit for making it though, the animation on the other hand, HAS improved since the first one, and I give you points for that.
Well then....
The animation is good, not great but its not horrible either. The voices are good, with addition of some back ground music would pull this together very nicely I would think.
The low mark is because of the script in general. The funniest part was the guy calling for the magic school bus and that joke was driven into the ground.. quickly! You have bad puns which doesn't expand on anything or timed correctly. What I mean by that is there is no flow in the story to set up the pun. As soon as the character starts to speak it's too predictable what is coming next.
Next is the roid money in the back that could do much more if you made him get physical and not just sit there and mouth off. Not to mention the two stoned in the back which add nothing to the story either.
You have characters, conflicts and a great setting for things but the execution of these concepts fall flat. Keep trying and I am sure you will find the right flow and timing for these things.