no, just no
i've seen better first attempts at flash, try again with more effort
Reviews for "Black Mages PORTAL"
What?
What dud i just watch?
Hrm. A poor attempt
I am sorry to say, but...this was a rather poor attempt. The animation is sub-par, the humor is lacking (if there is any), and it looks more like a test phase than an actual flash.
This is not to deter you. If it really is a test, then continue to do flash. But only once you have gained some finesse into what you are doing should you post up your work. I look forward to any other projects you have in mind, but again, work out all the bugs and flaws you can before the next one.