tbh despite being hilarious its still kinda nice to listen to
Reviews for "Awesome Guy"
Good lyrical work my friend! Your lyrics flowed so well that I had to put it into my podcast. I've given you credit where its due and published it noting it under the CC license. If you'd like a link to the 'cast let me know and I'll send you one.
SonicWombat responds:
Psh, of course, I'd LOVE a link to your podcast, dude.
Like it in general, but:
Some weird deviations from your structure. I'm pretty sure there was a verse, or part of one, that was like 7bars and 3 beats instead of your regular 8 bars or whatever. Recorded at 3 in the morning, so I'll give you that one.
It ain't ska. Gimme da upstroke skankin' beat, yo!
Chorus could have more lyrical variation, and maybe a different chord progression in there.
I really like your rhymes though! I think this could actually make an awesome, if somewhat semi-narcissistic, tune!