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Reviews for "Lighthouse"

Honestly, I wasn't sure of what to expect from this since you only recently started uploading and you got on the top submissions, but I admit this is good music. I mean, starting at 1:33 it sounds like something I would write.

I think your drums feel alienated, though. I'd suggest either to use different samples or reverb, cutting out some of the low mid/bass punch in your snare and try to cut freqs where you can in your bass drum. I'm not telling you to make sacrifices in your bass drum, just see what you can EQ out of the picture, cuz it sounds a bit messy with all these low freqs from the piano (which I'd imagine you don't want to cut too much of).

I also feel a lack of panoramic depth. Play with the panning of your instruments so you can get a sweeter ambient feel.

It's a good song and I get the idea, it just need mixing work.

LunyAlex responds:

So you know that saying better late than never?
Eh. It's not a great saying really but here's a 6 years late reply:

Thank you for your detailed review and your constructive feedback. It was appreciated at the time, but there were times back then when I wasn't in the state of mind to reply. Sorry bout' that.

Now I'm trying to fill the gaps, haha.

Thanks again :D