Good graphics, ok gameplay, bad english
It's all in all a pretty solid game to start with. It has pretty neat graphics and gameplay isn't all that bad. The one thing I do recommend is reviewing your 4th Grade English notes... Singular and Plural nouns are something that should not be mixed up! There are a few grammar bits which annoyed me (commas where there should have been semi-colons, incomplete sentences, repeated ideas within the same sentence), and a few various errors with using participles and such. I mean, 'Age of Kingdom' is incorrect... in English you need an article or you need to make it plural ('Age of the Kingdom', 'Age of a Kingdom', or 'Age of Kingdoms')... and 'Age of Kingdom' is your title.
One other thing is that gameplay gets a little boring after a while. It moves by very slowly... one has to be very careful with turn-based games because they can either be extremely addicting (like Sid Meier's Civilization franchise) or boring as can be. Perhaps making it go by faster would make it more appealing to audiences.
Other than that, it's a good game. :)