Ear rape.
You know what, it was very hard to watch this. Why? Because of the constant ear rape. The static gets louder and louder, and mixed with other sounds, it just drove me fucking insane. If you want your movie to be watched, at least properly edit the sound so that it doesnt drive people insane throughout the whole movie.
Other than the ear rape, the movie was honestly pretty bad. The movements were stiff, the story was completely absent, I had no clue what was really going on. Was this a trailer? Either way, it wasn't really entertaining. You seem to have the movements down, but you need to work on how you execute them. And try to have a story next time, something that would stand out even the slightest bit.