Strange
As most people would rate a zero, I think this has got potential, you just need better inspiration. This is a one-way ticket to manga fame if you get some better software that MS Paint and Windows Movie Maker.
Reviews for "Cheese-kun"
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I have no idea what just happened, but I fell compelled to laugh...
Not funny
It wasn't funny, and the ''lol'' at the end was stupid, but at least you animated it quite well, and you made the effort to make an easter egg. So it's not very bad. But next time, think of a better joke.