The Formula
I know that flash animations are extremely limited with respect to how fluid one would hope to make their submission. But, this animation didn't impress me in the least. How many commercials have we seen which warn of the dangers of smoking using the testimony of a young girl who has recently lost a family member to the indulgence. The premise is a tear jerker but has remained in popular culture like some sort of antique. Attaching poor animation to a tried and true premise is in poor taste. You have the potential to create true works of art that scream originality and creativity. In the future don't take short cuts.