awesome!
your animation skills have definitely improved. i really loved how smooth it was and its transitions! the sound effects and music were pretty good. i really like how much this has improved. :D
bleh. not a fan at all of my narrating in this. i wish i knew what this had sounded like. :/ the male voice actor was solid though!
Ahhh .
You may not have been a fan of your voice but I thought it was 100% perfect!! And obviously many others here on Newgrounds think so too!
You did the voice exactly how I described it should sound for the part, and that takes skill. You did AMAZING. Kayyy???
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Good :D
hope the next one is longer though ._. also watch out for typos like at the end "Negrounds" that looks sorta racist so you should keep an eye out for stuff like that :P
Hahahaha yeah.
lets put it this way
cant wait for the next one!!!!
Damn
That was....depressing.
Fantastic!
But did you have to kill her, i actually was starting to get more interested about her.
I even didn't like the idea that he kills her at the end, i even though that there would be a sequel.... Anyways you can make a sequel one way or another, as it's an unfortunate girl.... She had to be cursed or something.
I hope you get the hint.
Who says she has to die at the end? Maybe something FORTUNATE happens for her.