Its not too bad but make it longer
The only thing about this movie is that it is pretty short, I know you were trying to make it that short because its just one idea, but in my opinion its not enough to be a good funny clip.
Maybe add a few other short clips in there so that it is like a collection of funny skits or something. But yeah, gotta add something to your clip, just one little idea is not enough. Or add like a few sounds as that soul is running away and hits something and says "I'm alright" or something like that.